I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, July 5, 2019
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Hi Cameron
ReplyDeleteI really like the picture that you put in the post. The thing i think you should work on is the fact that it doesn't say much about why you wan't to have quills. It says what you would do if you had quills. If you were a porcupine would you do anything else fun apart from poke people with your quills?