There once was a cool boy named joe
and he liked to play in the snow
And he made a snowman
And shot the big snow fan
And he left the bow in the snow
By cameron
I am a student at South Hornby Primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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i like how you put the rhyming words in i like bows and snow mans
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DeleteHi Cameron i like your rhyming next time maybe double check your spelling like the title should be My Poem and don't forget capital letters in your name and full stops at the end
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DeleteThanks Cameron j i will make sure to do the in the future
Hi Cameron, the poor snowman
ReplyDeleteThanks mum
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