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Tuesday, August 28, 2018

My peom :)

There once was a cool boy named joe
and he liked to play in the snow  
And he made a snowman
And shot the big snow fan
And he left the bow in the snow
By cameron

6 comments:

  1. i like how you put the rhyming words in i like bows and snow mans

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  2. Hi Cameron i like your rhyming next time maybe double check your spelling like the title should be My Poem and don't forget capital letters in your name and full stops at the end
    From Cameron

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    1. Thanks Cameron j i will make sure to do the in the future

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