My poem
There once was a boy named cat-tap
6Who loved to put on his cap
It was tall and dark blue
It always grew
Whenever he had a long nap
By cameron
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ReplyDeleteAwesome poem. Wish my hat grew when I slept
ReplyDeleteThank you what do you think i should approve on? i like your hat.
Deletei like your poem cameron i like the name cat-tap
ReplyDeleteim wondering why dose his hat grow when he has a long nap