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Friday, June 7, 2019

stretched sentences

In literacy we have been learning about stretched sentences we had to take these sentences and make them long here is my one.


They opened the vault with dynamite and it went BOOM!
They yelled GUARDS chase them and the guard ran
Hes swimming away from the sharks
They all clapped saying go guards and off the guards went chasing

he yawned with how tired he was after that
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  1. AnonymousJune 7, 2019 at 11:34 AM

    Hi Cameron it Tyler I like the way you did a mine story.made next time you could think of another sentice starter.my question is what would the persons name be if you named him?

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    1. AnonymousJune 13, 2019 at 7:49 AM

      Hi tyler if i was to name the person id probably name it jeff

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  2. AnonymousJune 7, 2019 at 11:40 AM

    Hi Cameron it Noah i like the way you did a mine story.maybe next you could think of another sentence starter.

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    1. AnonymousJune 13, 2019 at 7:48 AM

      Hi Noah ill try make another one during literacy

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  3. AnonymousJune 7, 2019 at 12:05 PM

    Hi Cameron Caleb here
    I like the way you have used you impersonation to this good piece of work

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