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Friday, June 7, 2019

The mystical land of dragons

            

The mystical land of dragon

By:cameron

One day three boys logan tyler and cameron were at school. After school ended they all went for a walk in the woods when they were in there they saw a cave they checked it out it looked like an ordinary bear cave when they heard fire they hid behind a rock and waited until it ended when it did they checked what was inside it was a DR DR DRAGOooooooN. They ran away but they didn't tell anyone the next day they keeped thinking about the dragons they went back to the cave they checked if the dragons where still there they weren't there so they went in all they heard is wind it was really cold they left the cave and went home at home they searched about dragons it said nothing the day at school they talked about what to do after school then suddenly lets go check out he dragons suddenly there was a forest fire and it went into the city the water dragon came in and put out the fire the city thanked them and the dragons were respected and the city didn't have many problems after that. The end.resource image




3 comments:

  1. Hi Cameron its Tyler i like the way you yoused your imajernation in it.I think you could work puting more fullstops.And my question is what are the dragons names

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  2. HI it is Noah maybe next time you can screen shot the image, i like the way you yoused your impersonation in it.I think you could work punting more full stops. And my question is what are the dragons name.

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  3. Hi Cameron Caleb here impersonation that is for the work you might need to work on the full stops and capital letters

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